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Foals Rush In (part 1) by MLP-Silver-Quill Foals Rush In (part 1) by MLP-Silver-Quill
Ah, there's nothing like trying to cook up a fan-made character. So much uncertainty about how well they'll mesh with a pre-established story, but fun at the same time.

I envisioned this scenario while pondering the backstory of my own OC. Before I knew it, I was drawing several backgrounds and putting together a comic strip.

<Part 2>
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:iconpegasusfantasy2000:
PegasusFantasy2000 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Awww.  Twilight's teary face breaks my heart!  I want to hug her so much.
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:iconartisticninjacat:
ArtisticNinjaCat Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OOOO! This is a fail that breaks bones!
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:iconmlpdreamer:
mlpDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
Cute :) Of course a ladder would have worked too.
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:icondallasblack:
DallasBlack Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Amazing how much you have improved Mr. Quill. This is a fine piece of work, but Clutterstep has come quite a long way and I much prefer his look as he is now.
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
That looked like such a good idea.
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:iconamorrafan17:
Amorrafan17 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I wonder how he plans on landing or this one of those "plan as you go" plans?
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
Oh, so you made this before getting better, like with main series comic. Okay.
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:iconspyrofan923:
spyrofan923 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
Enter: Clutterstep
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:iconthejayster49:
TheJayster49 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What's that white stuff around his eye?
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:iconjulian0123:
julian0123 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's his birthmark.
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:iconthejayster49:
TheJayster49 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never thought of it that way
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:iconskytailskitty:
skytailskitty Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mah he got itxD
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:iconconker139:
Conker139 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
lmao at least he got it 
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:iconghalaghor:
Ghalaghor Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
the only possible way: badass style!
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:icontropenamer:
tropenamer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
shoryukenplz Cue Guile's theme music!shoryukenplz 
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:icondragonking17:
Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Flash Fire: I have to admit kid I would have done the same thing.
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:iconshadowwing09:
ShadowWing09 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
I normally am not a fan of OC's, as they're often bland or Gary-Stus. Having read this whole series thus far (Part 11, as of this posting) I have to say that Clutterstep has really won me over. He's got more heart, charm, and personality than the vast majority of OC's I've seen, and I'm really looking forward to seeing the poor guy get his happy ending :)
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:iconspyrofan923:
spyrofan923 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Totally kickass. I always liked heroes who put their bodies on the line for what seems to be the smallest things. Brings tears to your eyes, y'know? It works for a hero who's purpose, among other things, is to inspire others. A fine OC you have there friend. :thumbsup:
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:iconzdforrest:
ZDForrest Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Writer
Cue goofy scream: EEEEEHOOOHOOOEEEEEIIIIII!!
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:icongogogadgethat:
Gogogadgethat Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
YAH-HOO-HOO-HOO-HOO-HOOEY!
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Perfectly fitting. :XD:
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:iconjetjk3:
JETJK3 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Would you jump out of a window for Twilight?
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:iconstar-peace:
Star-Peace Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes! :D
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:iconwildshadow1:
Wildshadow1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
I love your character, he's realistic, adorable and sweet
unlike all the mary sue/gary stu alicorn princesses/princes/demons/whatever that are the missing "7th element of harmony" and are also the best pony ever and more powerful than twilight and the princesses :roll:
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:iconnebelpanther:
Nebelpanther Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
awww...this is so cute <3 PLEASE continue on the "A Princess' Tears" comics!
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:iconlordv255:
lordv255 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
what was going through my mind during the last two framess: I'm going to stretch out with my hooves and grab something I would normally need fingers for....
and now I fall....

:P

anyway... I have a question... why does he have glue around his eyes
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:icondiscordingness:
Discordingness Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Discord:It worked!

Sheldon:What worked?

Discord:Making a pony fall.To his DEATH! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconbabyjoshy5:
Babyjoshy5 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats how we do it in the hood baby!
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:iconsuperomar99:
superomar99 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
3rd panel: (Chariots of fire plays)
4th panel: (The Price Is Right fail horns)
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:iconlucario2008:
Lucario2008 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
AW! What a nice fellow! This story looks promising indeed!
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:iconkasil10:
Kasil10 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
BADASS!
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:iconthedrazonian:
TheDrazonian Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Twilight: I'm so sorry, I didn't mean for you to get hurt...
Earth Pony in the hospital: It's ok, I chose to do it don't worry. I'm just wondering though. Why couldn't you use your magic?
Twilight: My mag... oh yeah...
Earth Pony: *Bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!!!*
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:iconmlp-silver-quill:
MLP-Silver-Quill Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And he could hold a curse that long. Awesome breath control!
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:iconfatfan12345:
fatfan12345 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Lolz he died. XD
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
*Que dramatic/epic soundtrack here*
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:iconfiarcurrin:
fiarcurrin Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
AAWW! That is so sweet. What's his name?
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:iconmlp-silver-quill:
MLP-Silver-Quill Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! I call him Clutterstep.
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:iconfiarcurrin:
fiarcurrin Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He is so cute! Is there a story? I love stories so much, I'm weird that way.
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:iconmlp-silver-quill:
MLP-Silver-Quill Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not weird at all. I love good stories.

I am working on a tale about Clutterstep, but it's set after he's grown into a young stallion. This comic is part of his background building.
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:iconfiarcurrin:
fiarcurrin Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well I can't wait until the story comes out!
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:iconwerewolfdragon15135:
werewolfdragon15135 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Whats an oc
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:iconmlp-silver-quill:
MLP-Silver-Quill Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It stands for "Original Character."

Examples include the Firefox pony, Sabrina Alberghetti's Wild Fire, and one could argue that Derpy Hooves is a fan community OC.
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:iconwerewolfdragon15135:
werewolfdragon15135 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
Ok that explained every thing.
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:iconthe-real-rainbowdash:
((OC's are stupid.))
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:iconj4m35c:
J4m35c Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
*some
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:iconmlp-silver-quill:
MLP-Silver-Quill Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nonsense.
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:iconzdforrest:
ZDForrest Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Writer
Who can resist a face like that :)
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:icontayana-arystae:
Tayana-Arystae Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Frame 5 is great! Poor twilight!
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:icontylec-asroc:
Tylec-Asroc Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
I can't wait to read the thrilling conclusions!
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:iconbb-k:
BB-K Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh no! That's bad!

PS : Hey, your comics are pretty, will you be so kind to submit them to :iconponycomics: , this club is so famous for the comics and you deserve to get in there. ;)
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